Thursday, March 28, 2013
Assignment 9
After rereading my essay and reflective writing, I didn't connect Orlean's choices I choose to talk about and I didn't state my own thoughts and views once again. In the first assignments, I did not use much examples from Orlean's article. I would just tell what her choices were, and say how it may have helped further her purpose. For assignment 7, I begin to incorporate certain quotes from Orlean's article and I would explain how it helped me understand her purpose. I feel that I do have my purpose stated clearly because at our group discussion, my colleagues point out what my purpose is. Although, I am still debating what is really Orlean's purpose for composing an article like this.
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It's good that you're starting to see what you want to do in a future draft.
ReplyDeleteReally try to engage with the reflective course goals--who do you see yourself engaging with? What do you think about the ethical dimension of communication?
And always, always try to use examples from your own writing. That will get you in the habit of talking about your writing for the reflective essay.